Etheree

[ChristopherSea]

I believe this is actually a double etheree. Starting four lines in a row with your, you, you, yet is not inventive or pleasing enough. The same is true for the lines with something, (probably?) something, anything, nothing, nothing, nothing, nothing. That's what I thought that I heard herein, i.e., something about nothing. Don't capitalize every line, use periods and commas. Until you master their usage, we all need them. Don't conform to a form. Your open and close could be part of sentences, not just word lists. I would not give up on this. Write it again in sentences with thoughts and images, then arrange it into the form. Cheers!