Tin Roof Faith
#2
Hope you don't mind but played around with your
poem and it came out like this .to be honest I liked
the original and I also liked the collaboration
Hope your not offended , cheers


Rain on my tin roof like static
Strikes fear in my heart
From my youth
I question my faith but
I'm praying
To a god that ain't here in my room

Protect me Jesus please save me
In return I will always believe
I lie to myself
Ain't nobody to hear
My comfort is foreign and fake
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Tin Roof Faith - by brandonalsip - 08-11-2013, 03:04 AM
RE: Tin Roof Faith - by animasrwm - 08-12-2013, 05:32 AM
RE: Tin Roof Faith - by Martyr - 08-12-2013, 01:56 PM
RE: Tin Roof Faith - by Snags - 08-12-2013, 03:56 PM



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