08-12-2013, 05:32 AM
Hope you don't mind but played around with your
poem and it came out like this .to be honest I liked
the original and I also liked the collaboration
Hope your not offended , cheers
Rain on my tin roof like static
Strikes fear in my heart
From my youth
I question my faith but
I'm praying
To a god that ain't here in my room
Protect me Jesus please save me
In return I will always believe
I lie to myself
Ain't nobody to hear
My comfort is foreign and fake
poem and it came out like this .to be honest I liked
the original and I also liked the collaboration
Hope your not offended , cheers
Rain on my tin roof like static
Strikes fear in my heart
From my youth
I question my faith but
I'm praying
To a god that ain't here in my room
Protect me Jesus please save me
In return I will always believe
I lie to myself
Ain't nobody to hear
My comfort is foreign and fake

