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On feeling
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08-12-2013, 01:45 AM
martyr- thanks for the feedback. I do try and use internal rhymes when they happen to pop in the brain. I think I will re word the second line. thanks for the feedback!
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On feeling - by Bunx - 08-11-2013, 03:39 AM
RE: On feeling - by animasrwm - 08-11-2013, 04:06 AM
RE: On feeling - by Martyr - 08-11-2013, 09:17 PM
RE: On feeling - by Bunx - 08-12-2013, 01:45 AM
RE: On feeling - by Bunx - 08-13-2013, 03:21 AM



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