08-11-2013, 04:46 AM
when you look at it you don't think the rhythm works but when you read it has a strange way of fitting. nice little poem. although you should stick to a specific rhyming scheme instead of it being all over the place
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RE: Delusions - by Bunx - 08-10-2013, 03:30 AM
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