08-11-2013, 03:51 AM
brandon, pretty good poem.
I had a hard time picking out the theme of this poem, is it really the nature of "gods wrath?" L4
or is the poems theme death, by hanging? I liked this poem for the imagery it gave me, ass well as the contrast of ideas in regards
to death itself.
If i were you i'd break the poem up into different stanzas, to make the flow a bit easier. Break lines up to make sense rhythmically
I had a hard time picking out the theme of this poem, is it really the nature of "gods wrath?" L4
or is the poems theme death, by hanging? I liked this poem for the imagery it gave me, ass well as the contrast of ideas in regards
to death itself.
If i were you i'd break the poem up into different stanzas, to make the flow a bit easier. Break lines up to make sense rhythmically
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
Bunx