Sight

[brandonalsip]

I am not invisible, but
I border on transparent.
You’ll notice me when no one else is there.
I disappear
so easily
in a crowded glare.

[I don't really know if I would consider this poetry or not but it was something I wrote(and could not title properly) and just thought I'd share it with you guys. Maybe some will enjoy it. Maybe someone won't. Either way I appreciate feedback very much.]

I hate rhyming.

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I am not invisible, but
I border on transparent.
You’ll notice me when no one else is there.
I disappear
so easily
in a crowded glare.

[I don't really know if I would consider this poetry or not but it was something I wrote(and could not title properly) and just thought I'd share it with you guys. Maybe some will enjoy it. Maybe someone won't. Either way I appreciate feedback very much.]

I hate rhyming.

When you rhyme in a poem it seems to say that you are willing to sacrifice the entire meaning of your work for a pretty sound that means nothing, especially in this Rhymezone age.