Sight
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(08-06-2013, 05:30 AM)brandonalsip Wrote:  I am not invisible, but
I border on transparent.
You’ll notice me when no one else is there.
I disappear
so easily
in a crowded glare.

[I don't really know if I would consider this poetry or not but it was something I wrote(and could not title properly) and just thought I'd share it with you guys. Maybe some will enjoy it. Maybe someone won't. Either way I appreciate feedback very much.]
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Sight - by brandonalsip - 08-06-2013, 05:30 AM
RE: Sight - by fim - 08-07-2013, 07:06 PM
RE: Sight - by brandonalsip - 08-11-2013, 02:15 AM
RE: Sight - by ScurryFunger - 08-11-2013, 02:33 AM
RE: Sight - by brandonalsip - 08-11-2013, 02:51 AM
RE: Sight - by ScurryFunger - 08-11-2013, 03:07 AM
RE: Sight - by animasrwm - 08-15-2013, 08:38 PM
RE: Sight - by ChristopherSea - 08-15-2013, 09:15 PM



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