08-10-2013, 11:49 PM
Yes the oldest game in the world, I like the ideas you have inside this eg the hidden faces and who is and isn't to blame and not being able to stop. it could be improved by cutting back some of the lines, I would target the ones that repeat the same message as a previous line and try to build in some images to make it more graphic for the reader. Its a good topic and you have some good stuff ripe for development. Many thanks for the read TOMH
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