picnic
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(08-10-2013, 07:00 AM)TimeOnMyHands Wrote:  
(08-10-2013, 06:50 AM)ScurryFunger Wrote:  
(08-10-2013, 06:36 AM)TimeOnMyHands Wrote:  happy day dream to reality great stuff, made me smile, laughed at the ending thanks TOMH
Thanks, should I take all the punctuation out though? I think I will do it.
Personally I would leave it as it helps the reader IMO and dictates how you want it to be read. best TOMH

Oh, right I was a bit hasty?
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picnic - by ScurryFunger - 08-10-2013, 12:52 AM
RE: picnic - by Keith - 08-10-2013, 06:36 AM
RE: picnic - by ScurryFunger - 08-10-2013, 06:50 AM
RE: picnic - by Keith - 08-10-2013, 07:00 AM
RE: picnic - by ScurryFunger - 08-10-2013, 07:03 AM
RE: picnic - by billy - 08-10-2013, 07:46 AM
RE: picnic - by ScurryFunger - 08-16-2013, 02:08 AM



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