08-10-2013, 03:30 AM
i have schizophrenia so this poem hit home. I like how you compare delusional thought with everyday average problems. You bring delusional thought into the minds of the (un-delusional). anyways,
thank you so much for the feed! i would love to hear feedback on some of my poems, you might be able to catch my illness in the text.
As someone with a mental condition i would suggest distance yourself from thought all together. make your world the world just infront of your eyes.
thank you so much for the feed! i would love to hear feedback on some of my poems, you might be able to catch my illness in the text.
As someone with a mental condition i would suggest distance yourself from thought all together. make your world the world just infront of your eyes.
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
Bunx

