Time Traveller
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(08-09-2013, 07:21 PM)ChristopherSea Wrote:  Oh dear, this is quit moving and it truly choked me up first thing this morning. A couple minor typos: Capitalize 'T' in 'the' before 'window' and change 'Georges' to 'George's'. Emotive poetry!/Chris
Many thanks Chris for the typo's and comment, not sure how this one came about could have been the old chestnut of assisted suicide that has been on the news again recently, anyway Ethel was terminaly ill and Goerge didn't wait for a court ruling, a Morris traveller seemed a fitting end to a couple such as I imagined them. Keith

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Time Traveller - by Keith - 08-09-2013, 09:48 AM
RE: Time Traveller - by billy - 08-09-2013, 03:02 PM
RE: Time Traveller - by Keith - 08-09-2013, 05:39 PM
RE: Time Traveller - by ChristopherSea - 08-09-2013, 07:21 PM
RE: Time Traveller - by Keith - 08-10-2013, 12:14 AM



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