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Winner Stops On
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08-09-2013, 04:32 AM
Thanks, Milo, Billy. I wasn't sure whether to put it in Serious or not, opted for Comedy in the end. I'm not mad about the final 2 lines, the rest is ok.
Before criticising a person try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise that person, you are a mile away.... and you have their shoes.
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Winner Stops On - by ray - 08-08-2013, 06:31 PM
RE: Winner Stops On - by milo - 08-08-2013, 06:41 PM
RE: Winner Stops On - by billy - 08-08-2013, 06:50 PM
RE: Winner Stops On - by ray - 08-09-2013, 04:32 AM
RE: Winner Stops On - by milo - 08-09-2013, 05:40 AM
RE: Winner Stops On - by Keith - 08-09-2013, 06:11 AM
RE: Winner Stops On - by ray - 08-09-2013, 04:29 PM
RE: Winner Stops On - by newsclippings - 08-09-2013, 04:38 PM
RE: Winner Stops On - by ray - 08-09-2013, 07:58 PM
RE: Winner Stops On - by ScurryFunger - 08-09-2013, 08:16 PM
RE: Winner Stops On - by ray - 08-09-2013, 08:48 PM
RE: Winner Stops On - by ScurryFunger - 08-10-2013, 12:01 AM
RE: Winner Stops On - by ray - 08-10-2013, 12:08 AM
RE: Winner Stops On - by heslopian - 08-10-2013, 09:05 PM
RE: Winner Stops On - by ray - 08-10-2013, 11:51 PM
RE: Winner Stops On - by trueenigma - 08-12-2013, 12:12 AM
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