08-08-2013, 08:27 PM
I know nothing of the myth, but that only trips me up at the six seeds. It's presumably being used to throw light on a modern relationship.
I wonder why clouds would be painted, rather than sky, sun, something cheery.
breezes do not reach the pipes that breathe
excreta into algal blooms, red as the storm that rends
mother from child - the best part of the poem
Maybe "another's" would be better than "someone else's", someone having already been used.
I wonder why clouds would be painted, rather than sky, sun, something cheery.
breezes do not reach the pipes that breathe
excreta into algal blooms, red as the storm that rends
mother from child - the best part of the poem
Maybe "another's" would be better than "someone else's", someone having already been used.
Before criticising a person try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise that person, you are a mile away.... and you have their shoes.