Winner Stops On

Winner Stops On

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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08-08-2013, 06:50 PM

it's not the feedback forums here but i like it a lot. is there a half foot missing from the last line i wonder?
love the metaphor that runs through the whole poem.

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Winner Stops On - by ray - 08-08-2013, 06:31 PM

RE: Winner Stops On - by milo - 08-08-2013, 06:41 PM

RE: Winner Stops On - by billy - 08-08-2013, 06:50 PM

RE: Winner Stops On - by ray - 08-09-2013, 04:32 AM

RE: Winner Stops On - by milo - 08-09-2013, 05:40 AM

RE: Winner Stops On - by Keith - 08-09-2013, 06:11 AM

RE: Winner Stops On - by ray - 08-09-2013, 04:29 PM

RE: Winner Stops On - by newsclippings - 08-09-2013, 04:38 PM

RE: Winner Stops On - by ray - 08-09-2013, 07:58 PM

RE: Winner Stops On - by ScurryFunger - 08-09-2013, 08:16 PM

RE: Winner Stops On - by ray - 08-09-2013, 08:48 PM

RE: Winner Stops On - by ScurryFunger - 08-10-2013, 12:01 AM

RE: Winner Stops On - by ray - 08-10-2013, 12:08 AM

RE: Winner Stops On - by heslopian - 08-10-2013, 09:05 PM

RE: Winner Stops On - by ray - 08-10-2013, 11:51 PM

RE: Winner Stops On - by trueenigma - 08-12-2013, 12:12 AM

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