Bird (edit 2)

[newsclippings]

There was no mourning
for the bird this morning; this semi colon isn't necessary
Laying limp on the cross walk. does Laying need to be capitalized?

I simply passed him by. comma?
Didn't bother with goodbye,
was in a hurry this line is unnecessary
on the fly;so is this one

as always. and this one

if you're going with a short poem, it's important to have some potency and not regurgitation.

with that said, thanks for the read. the first stanza is decent.