Bird (edit 2)

Bird (edit 2)

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08-08-2013, 04:56 PM

Thnx for reading and commenting everyone, im glad some people enjoyed this.

(08-08-2013, 03:17 AM)TheWall0912 Wrote: If it was up to me I might get rid of this line and just continue with the next two, I'm just not sure it adds much to the poem, but that's just me.

That was my least favorite line in the poem, I think ill probably edit it out. (:

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Bird (edit 2) - by makeshift - 08-08-2013, 03:00 AM

RE: Bird - by TheWall0912 - 08-08-2013, 03:17 AM

RE: Bird - by makeshift - 08-08-2013, 04:56 PM

RE: Bird - by Bunx - 08-08-2013, 03:42 AM

RE: Bird - by Green Ink - 08-08-2013, 11:10 AM

RE: Bird - by milo - 08-08-2013, 11:14 AM

RE: Bird - by newsclippings - 08-08-2013, 05:22 PM

RE: Bird - by makeshift - 08-08-2013, 06:04 PM

RE: Bird - by billy - 08-08-2013, 06:41 PM

RE: Bird - by ChristopherSea - 08-09-2013, 12:43 AM

RE: Bird - by newsclippings - 08-09-2013, 10:10 AM

RE: Bird - by makeshift - 08-09-2013, 11:47 AM

RE: Bird - by newsclippings - 08-09-2013, 11:53 AM

RE: Bird - by makeshift - 08-09-2013, 12:29 PM

RE: Bird - by milo - 08-09-2013, 12:41 PM

RE: Bird - by billy - 08-09-2013, 01:08 PM

RE: Bird - by tectak - 08-10-2013, 03:46 PM

RE: Bird - by makeshift - 08-19-2013, 04:18 PM

RE: Bird - by ChristopherSea - 08-20-2013, 07:40 AM

RE: Bird - by makeshift - 08-20-2013, 11:43 AM

RE: Bird - by ChristopherSea - 08-20-2013, 12:10 PM

RE: Bird - by ChristopherSea - 08-20-2013, 12:26 PM

RE: Bird - by milo - 08-20-2013, 11:57 AM

RE: Bird - by makeshift - 08-20-2013, 12:22 PM

RE: Bird edit 2 - by makeshift - 08-29-2013, 08:47 AM

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