08-08-2013, 11:26 AM
(08-08-2013, 10:44 AM)billy Wrote: A purple ocean over rolling hills;I have walked here Billy and this is a great depiction, my only bump was S1 L3 I'm not sure about the use of two. Thanks for the walk. Keith
that broad expanse of England's heathered spine great line
it held us captive, two Saturday ramblers. Sunday would pick up the place of worship in S2
Hiker's crooks, and boots ready to stride good images
the granite altar. Spread throughout the moor I can see this
it was our solace, our place of worship.
We'd watch as tired waterfowl alit
on mirrored planes of silver painted ponds. Solid Stanza
A thousand threads of white as ripples pushed
across a canvass of Picasso blue.
The Kestrels hovered hard against the wind and
waited on the wing before they dove. visually very strong and I like the dive into lakes
from the mentor thread
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out

