Her Special Place
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(08-08-2013, 10:44 AM)billy Wrote:  A purple ocean over rolling hills;
that broad expanse of England's heathered spine great line
it held us captive, two Saturday ramblers. Sunday would pick up the place of worship in S2
Hiker's crooks, and boots ready to stride good images

the granite altar. Spread throughout the moor I can see this
it was our solace, our place of worship.
We'd watch as tired waterfowl alit
on mirrored planes of silver painted ponds. Solid Stanza

A thousand threads of white as ripples pushed
across a canvass of Picasso blue.
The Kestrels hovered hard against the wind and
waited on the wing before they dove. visually very strong and I like the dive into lakes

from the mentor thread
I have walked here Billy and this is a great depiction, my only bump was S1 L3 I'm not sure about the use of two. Thanks for the walk. Keith

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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Her Special Place - by billy - 08-08-2013, 10:44 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by R.C. KITCHENS - 08-08-2013, 11:07 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by billy - 08-08-2013, 11:33 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by Keith - 08-08-2013, 11:26 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by ray - 08-08-2013, 06:57 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by ChristopherSea - 08-08-2013, 07:54 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by tectak - 08-08-2013, 10:30 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by GrhmJngL - 08-09-2013, 02:13 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by billy - 08-14-2013, 05:43 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by tectak - 08-22-2013, 03:20 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by billy - 08-22-2013, 04:42 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by tectak - 08-22-2013, 05:05 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by billy - 08-22-2013, 05:07 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by tectak - 08-23-2013, 01:29 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by ChristopherSea - 08-23-2013, 01:39 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by billy - 08-23-2013, 10:43 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by ChristopherSea - 08-22-2013, 10:46 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by btrudo - 08-23-2013, 07:56 AM



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