Dreams

[R.C. KITCHENS]

it's format is enough imagery and the way it's formatted is to resemble stairs, like a climbing pattern. More imagery would mean that I make it longer and it has a simple meaning, but I guess you were attracted to the third verse where it picks up a little, and it's good to know that people like that and want more of it. My other similar poems didn't get a lot of responses so I limited the imagery a bit, but it still is not watered down.

Just "special place" is cliche and vague. That's one line I'd fix. I honestly didnt pay attention to the formatting. I mean imagery- one good line in place of "special place" would do well.