08-08-2013, 04:02 AM
(07-23-2013, 06:36 AM)milo Wrote:I think that some of the best songs say very little. I have one song with one longish verse but the chorus is super simple.(07-23-2013, 06:23 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:I don't want to write a haiku
if you want to write haiku you should
include flowers and water and wood
contrast and compare
to twelve syllables pare
(and a third-line surprise would be good)
A poem? I suppose, but too few
Words, like a song
With one verse it's not long
Enough to get more than a view
"Your world is just a myth
nothing but a frown
your world is just a myth
spinning round and round"
later in the song I come to describe the girl as a conjure of my mind.
but the secret of the song lies within the chorus. 4 lines.
i dont think you need alot of words to make a song meaningful.
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