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Afterlife
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08-08-2013, 03:27 AM
It has spirit and feeling, and even intelligence. But the art of it is very rough. And it tries a lot with art and craft. If you keep at it, you might be able to smooth out your lines, find less forced sounding rhymes, and find some deeper and fresher things to say. Or what you're already saying in a more interesting and memorable way.
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RE: Afterlife - by rowens - 08-08-2013, 03:27 AM
RE: Afterlife - by jdguyb - 08-08-2013, 04:27 AM
RE: Afterlife - by Zabrina - 08-08-2013, 07:07 AM
RE: Afterlife - by Bunx - 08-08-2013, 12:53 PM
RE: Afterlife - by Zabrina - 08-08-2013, 02:28 PM
RE: Afterlife - by amberdwn - 08-10-2013, 04:18 AM
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