Bird (edit 2)

[TheWall0912]

There was no mourning
for the bird this morning; Nice play on words with mourning and morning
Laying limp on the cross walk.

I simply passed him by.
Didn't bother with goodbye, If it was up to me I might get rid of this line and just continue with the next two, I'm just not sure it adds much to the poem, but that's just me.
was in a hurry
on the fly;

as always.

I really enjoy the simplicity of this poem. Passing birds who've died on the street, or sidewalk, or where ever is such a common thing to happen to someone and yet, no one stops to think about it. I really like that you brought up something this simple and common and wrote about it. I can easily see myself thinking of this poem the next time I see a deceased bird.

Thanks for the read.