Senryu 2 (August 2013)
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(08-07-2013, 09:22 AM)billy Wrote:  i like it because i see nothing sexual in the last line
even though i want to
nicely done.
Thanks billy. I wanted to keep it as non-sexual as possible, and focus only on the transition from unborn to being born, and how the feeding and bonds change.
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Senryu 2 (August 2013) - by Volaticus - 08-06-2013, 10:46 AM
RE: Senryu 2 (August 2013) - by billy - 08-07-2013, 09:22 AM
RE: Senryu 2 (August 2013) - by Volaticus - 08-07-2013, 09:28 AM
RE: Senryu 2 (August 2013) - by ChristopherSea - 08-08-2013, 04:44 AM
RE: Senryu 2 (August 2013) - by Volaticus - 08-08-2013, 04:57 AM
RE: Senryu 2 (August 2013) - by Keith - 08-09-2013, 08:39 AM
RE: Senryu 2 (August 2013) - by Volaticus - 08-09-2013, 08:55 AM



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