08-07-2013, 08:25 AM
I enjoyed this poem thoroughly with it's use of words, multitude of elements and it's narrow message.
Although I don't believe you suckled dry completely what it means to be English in your words, I believe that there were many references to the past, the first couple of lines. I didn't find much connecting you personally, and this is just my perception but my advice is to edit a bit in about yourself so that it can relate to others as well as yourself just as easily as referring to history.
-Green Ink
Although I don't believe you suckled dry completely what it means to be English in your words, I believe that there were many references to the past, the first couple of lines. I didn't find much connecting you personally, and this is just my perception but my advice is to edit a bit in about yourself so that it can relate to others as well as yourself just as easily as referring to history.
-Green Ink