To Be English

To Be English

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#22

08-07-2013, 03:08 AM

Thank you for your excellent critique, tectak Smile

I'll use some of your suggestions to polish my third edit.

"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

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To Be English - by heslopian - 07-30-2013, 10:26 AM

RE: To Be English - by Wildcard - 07-30-2013, 12:46 PM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 07-30-2013, 07:25 PM

RE: To Be English - by billy - 07-30-2013, 06:18 PM

RE: To Be English - by ray - 07-30-2013, 08:35 PM

RE: To Be English - by cidermaid - 07-30-2013, 08:46 PM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 07-30-2013, 10:19 PM

RE: To Be English - by billy - 07-31-2013, 10:48 AM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 07-31-2013, 10:58 PM

RE: To Be English - by StevieFinn - 08-05-2013, 07:48 AM

RE: To Be English - by ray - 08-05-2013, 06:55 PM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-05-2013, 10:06 PM

RE: To Be English - by StevieFinn - 08-05-2013, 11:56 PM

RE: To Be English - by StevieFinn - 08-06-2013, 07:49 AM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-06-2013, 08:48 AM

RE: To Be English - by billy - 08-06-2013, 09:43 AM

RE: To Be English - by Wildcard - 08-06-2013, 12:49 PM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-06-2013, 01:00 PM

RE: To Be English - by tectak - 08-06-2013, 10:35 PM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-07-2013, 03:08 AM

RE: To Be English - by rayheinrich - 08-07-2013, 05:16 AM

RE: To Be English - by Green Ink - 08-07-2013, 08:25 AM

RE: To Be English - by tectak - 08-07-2013, 04:53 PM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-07-2013, 11:39 PM

RE: To Be English - by rayheinrich - 08-08-2013, 05:57 AM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-08-2013, 06:12 AM

RE: To Be English - by Achebe - 06-30-2016, 07:08 PM

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