08-06-2013, 07:32 PM
(08-05-2013, 07:11 AM)brandonalsip Wrote: Impossible watersI feel like you really let yourself get carried away with the adjectives at one point (constant and fickle steadfast and wavering unfeeling, cold, impermanent)
fill our sky with dreams
for fishers and for flyers
sow nightmares within timorous minds
of mountains dark and deadly
cover oceans like sheets
or vanish in cascades
structures
inspiring life immemorial
atmospheric murals redone a million times over
always changing, always beautiful
if heaven must be, it is walking on impossible waters
drowning in delicate vapors like the breath of God
other than that I liked it!
Thanks for posting!

