08-06-2013, 07:30 PM
(08-06-2013, 03:15 PM)makeshift Wrote: Dusk,I like the thought of personifying the times of day (I am assuming there will be 4 - dawn, day, dusk, night)
youthful child.
Daughter of day.
Pale,
hauntingly innocent,
helplessly small
prey.
Caught,
captive of time.
Left to decay.
Withering,
Lost and forgotten
Wasting a-
way.
I also liked hauntingly innocent a lot!
that last line break on a-
way didn't really make any sense to me.
thanks for posting!

