08-06-2013, 09:17 AM
Hi,
This poem didn't make much sense to me neither, and the typos just made it more difficult to read.
What did you want to convey? Who is the narrator? Who's the 'you'? There are more questions than answers.
JMHO. Do keep writing.
-LB
This poem didn't make much sense to me neither, and the typos just made it more difficult to read.
What did you want to convey? Who is the narrator? Who's the 'you'? There are more questions than answers.
JMHO. Do keep writing.
-LB