Older Days

[tectak]

If the righter was done
Finished and grimaced
With a silver tongue
Than Id fall right back to the beginnings
With whatever was won
But you don’t wear my chains
Nor should I know the same
If the beginning was winnings
And the rest was up to the sun
Than the crest would be flat
And stretch the riddler’s fun

Hi shep.
As there is no attempt to follow forum rules regarding the correction of basic errors, including typos, I have no choice but to move this to Novice, where you may be better received. There is no shame in this but you should know that this forum is for serious workshopping and is not intended as a correction facility.
Best,
tectak