Senryu (August 2013)

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Senryu (August 2013)

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08-05-2013, 12:42 PM

(08-05-2013, 11:50 AM)billy Wrote: hehe, i like it, not sure about throbbing gristle but it does have a certain ring to it

Thanks, I'm glad you like it. You think the first line works well enough to keep? Personally, I love the first line Wink

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Senryu (August 2013) - by Volaticus - 08-05-2013, 10:41 AM

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