08-05-2013, 12:43 AM
(08-04-2013, 04:01 AM)serge gurkski Wrote: Tom!Best,
To reconnect to life through death. If this is your subtle way of posting more than one poem at a time it works but I wish it did not. This stanza stands on its own. You will now willfully fuck it up by pointlessly peregrinating around and around. I can read more of you but if this is crit...I won'tSmile
I get you here but in all fairness you do not read me. And i always thought you were the best critic (for me) aeound, so i am frustrated. Tell me. Sir, how I can please you better.
Do you really think that what I wrote below of what you cared to comment upon is not worth being considered?
Imagine me alarmed now.
Tom:
It’s funny or a phenomenon to dendrologists funny peculiar would substitute.
Me:
No. Dendro-logist is a word. I know what a dendrologist is...I study plants, trees and shrubs. lt was the funny word I was questioning. " Funny" can be funny ha-ha-ha or funny peculiar. ha-ha. Does your dog bite? No. Ouch! I thought you said your dog didn't bite? It doesn't, that's not my dog. Funny!
That's funny...I was sure I put a condom on...where the hell has it gone? Most peculiar. Funny peculiar.
I am sorry and will not hold it (your comment) against you, that your Greek is lacking. that is obvious. why not read Geoffrey Horrocks on Greek. It is a fine language and once you get it you might even like it.
Let me help you here:
http://books.google.de/books/about/Greek...HPKIUXKGsC&redir_esc=y
serge on
(i switched to)
beers ( to better stand folks like you. ;-))
tectak

