The Risen Suicide

[serge gurkski]

This is by now a fairly old poem, serge, by which I mean I wrote it a few months ago, but thank you very much for your kind and insightful feedback, it's really appreciated You're right, of course, about capitalising "Hell", but I like to describe it as a specific place, like Berlin or San Francisco, which I think capitalisation emphasises. JMHO, of course.

I am fine with that. It is just a bit unusual.

But back to your writing: I am simply very impressed.

cheers
serge

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Tom wrote:"The falseness of her Christian grave will haunt
me in Your holy court. My soul was blind. Fine opener. Just enigmatic enough. "

Nope it is not enigmatic at all.
cheers
serge