08-04-2013, 04:56 AM
Thanks, Heslopian. I'm sure jaundice can be used as a verb. That wasn't my intent but I like the ambiguity now you've pointed it out. I'll have a think about punctuation and stuff.
I have to confess that it's not about stillborn babies. I've been instructed by someone who knows that every poet should write a meta-poem and a fish poem.
This is my meta-poem.
Would that it were a better poem.
I have to confess that it's not about stillborn babies. I've been instructed by someone who knows that every poet should write a meta-poem and a fish poem.
This is my meta-poem.
Would that it were a better poem.
Before criticising a person try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise that person, you are a mile away.... and you have their shoes.