08-04-2013, 04:01 AM
Tom!
To reconnect to life through death. If this is your subtle way of posting more than one poem at a time it works but I wish it did not. This stanza stands on its own. You will now willfully fuck it up by pointlessly peregrinating around and around. I can read more of you but if this is crit...I won'tSmile
I get you here but in all fairness you do not read me. And i always thought you were the best critic (for me) aeound, so i am frustrated. Tell me. Sir, how I can please you better.
Do you really think that what I wrote below of what you cared to comment upon is not worth being considered?
Imagine me alarmed now.
Tom:
It’s funny or a phenomenon to dendrologists funny peculiar would substitute.
Me:
No. Dendro-logist is a word.
I am sorry and will not hold it (your comment) against you, that your Greek is lacking. that is obvious. why not read Geoffrey Horrocks on Greek. It is a fine language and once you get it you might even like it.
Let me help you here:
http://books.google.de/books/about/Greek...HPKIUXKGsC&redir_esc=y
serge on
(i switched to)
beers ( to better stand folks like you. ;-))
To reconnect to life through death. If this is your subtle way of posting more than one poem at a time it works but I wish it did not. This stanza stands on its own. You will now willfully fuck it up by pointlessly peregrinating around and around. I can read more of you but if this is crit...I won'tSmile
I get you here but in all fairness you do not read me. And i always thought you were the best critic (for me) aeound, so i am frustrated. Tell me. Sir, how I can please you better.
Do you really think that what I wrote below of what you cared to comment upon is not worth being considered?
Imagine me alarmed now.
Tom:
It’s funny or a phenomenon to dendrologists funny peculiar would substitute.
Me:
No. Dendro-logist is a word.
I am sorry and will not hold it (your comment) against you, that your Greek is lacking. that is obvious. why not read Geoffrey Horrocks on Greek. It is a fine language and once you get it you might even like it.
Let me help you here:
http://books.google.de/books/about/Greek...HPKIUXKGsC&redir_esc=y
serge on
(i switched to)
beers ( to better stand folks like you. ;-))