08-04-2013, 01:52 AM
Tom: If this is your subtle way of posting more than one poem at a time it works but I wish it did not. This stanza stands on its own. You will now willfully fuck it up by pointlessly peregrinating around and around. I can read more of you but if this is crit...I won'tSmile
But that of course was my plan. You wanna know why: to show you fucking Brits (I don't mean you)
that I can write in your Neo-Anglo-Saxon tongue jus as well as .. wait Charles Dickens. You do not believe me?
You beter should becuz I'm gonna proove it to ya.
wait and see.
and still - and that's a complain - you have not send me
any however-so-cheap- Scotch eau de vie.
AM I not not worthy of getting majestically drunk
in honor of the celts.
I have an anecdote about an Irish sex bomb and a sweet sweet sweet Girl if ever there was one
but will not post this in public. ;-)
Don't hesitate to ask for more . ;-)
I am ready to share
(but only with you)
But that of course was my plan. You wanna know why: to show you fucking Brits (I don't mean you)
that I can write in your Neo-Anglo-Saxon tongue jus as well as .. wait Charles Dickens. You do not believe me?
You beter should becuz I'm gonna proove it to ya.
wait and see.
and still - and that's a complain - you have not send me
any however-so-cheap- Scotch eau de vie.
AM I not not worthy of getting majestically drunk
in honor of the celts.
I have an anecdote about an Irish sex bomb and a sweet sweet sweet Girl if ever there was one
but will not post this in public. ;-)
Don't hesitate to ask for more . ;-)
I am ready to share
(but only with you)