A Sparkly Crush
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Mr awesome, Mr smiley.
Your eyes have hooks and i dare not peak.
Contagious lashings of smiles for me.
I've never seen colour like this,
these colours that u shine I see.
Emerald green and golds,
sparkly boy you make my stomach skip.
My head is a huricane that bends and twists,
and I feel so high I cannot get grip.
In this storm I drown and sink.
But I've never died so alive you see...


I'm a novice who loves criticism so come at me Wink
ps this is my first poem
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A Sparkly Crush - by Bekkere - 08-03-2013, 10:54 PM
RE: A Sparkly Crush - by Rubi - 08-04-2013, 12:03 AM
RE: A Sparkly Crush - by jdguyb - 08-04-2013, 12:32 AM



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