08-02-2013, 04:46 PM
Thanks to The Wall - is that what we call you?
Billy - good point! I think it became a sonnet ( if indeed it is a sonnet) by default, accident, somewhere along the line.
I'm tempted now to just remove the last 2 lines - which nobody likes, not even me - and destroy any resemblance to a sonnet.
Billy - good point! I think it became a sonnet ( if indeed it is a sonnet) by default, accident, somewhere along the line.
I'm tempted now to just remove the last 2 lines - which nobody likes, not even me - and destroy any resemblance to a sonnet.
Before criticising a person try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise that person, you are a mile away.... and you have their shoes.