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08-02-2013, 04:20 PM

(08-01-2013, 05:07 PM)ray Wrote: Billy, Tectak, thanks very much.
I'm not really after strict metre and approximate rhymes are what I like best. I'm sure you're right, tectak, about tinkering and leaving holes. I've done it anyway in an attempt at clarity but I don't much like what it's become now!

then why write a sonnet; a form that works better with the things you're not after? (not condemning or saying don't) just curious?

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