08-02-2013, 03:17 PM
No offence taken haha, the feedback is great! I had a read through the links and its helped a lot.
"Forever and evrah" is just a thing we used to say to each other, just between us. This poem was just something I wrote to her, I had no intension of posting it online but then I came across this forum so I thought why not? May become a new hobby of mine
"Forever and evrah" is just a thing we used to say to each other, just between us. This poem was just something I wrote to her, I had no intension of posting it online but then I came across this forum so I thought why not? May become a new hobby of mine

