08-01-2013, 08:54 PM
Thanks for the feedback guys, it’s really appreciated 
@ tectak - I’d be more than happy for this to be moved for “good mauling”! As my 1st real attempt at poetry I need all the pointers I can get
@ fogglethorpe - thanks I agree the last couplet is unneeded and will remove it; it adds nothing. I went with 1st letter caps for a few reasons, although i certainly see the benefits of going with more standardised styling. Appreciate the comments, thankyou
@ milo - I hadn’t noticed until you pointed this out. it’s a good point and now seems obvious, I’ll keep this in mind with any future work, appreciate the critique, thankyou
@ tectak - I’d be more than happy for this to be moved for “good mauling”! As my 1st real attempt at poetry I need all the pointers I can get
@ fogglethorpe - thanks
I agree the last couplet is unneeded and will remove it; it adds nothing. I went with 1st letter caps for a few reasons, although i certainly see the benefits of going with more standardised styling. Appreciate the comments, thankyou @ milo - I hadn’t noticed until you pointed this out. it’s a good point and now seems obvious, I’ll keep this in mind with any future work, appreciate the critique, thankyou