08-01-2013, 05:07 PM
Billy, Tectak, thanks very much.
I'm not really after strict metre and approximate rhymes are what I like best. I'm sure you're right, tectak, about tinkering and leaving holes. I've done it anyway in an attempt at clarity but I don't much like what it's become now!
I'm not really after strict metre and approximate rhymes are what I like best. I'm sure you're right, tectak, about tinkering and leaving holes. I've done it anyway in an attempt at clarity but I don't much like what it's become now!
Before criticising a person try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise that person, you are a mile away.... and you have their shoes.