08-01-2013, 03:40 PM
"morning" in L1 seems a little unnecessary. You don't have to adhere to a strict 5-7-5 syllable count.
It's a lovely snapshot either way.
It's a lovely snapshot either way.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?