I sometimes feel like a grumpy old man...

[jdguyb]

I'm having trouble gasping the message from lines 1-3. It just seems like random writing to me. Lines 4 and 5 aren't much better. What's the message your trying to convey? What made you angry enough to impact glass wit your baseball bat? It seems like a random line. Where did the hostages come from? I understand where your coming from with the fluorescent hammer line. You outlined it well. The last stanza is great though