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To Be English
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07-31-2013, 10:58 PM
Thank you for your great feedback, Bilbo
 I'll return to this poem later and use a lot of your suggestions to make a third edit, as they really strip away the fat wonderfully.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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To Be English - by heslopian - 07-30-2013, 10:26 AM
RE: To Be English - by Wildcard - 07-30-2013, 12:46 PM
RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 07-30-2013, 07:25 PM
RE: To Be English - by billy - 07-30-2013, 06:18 PM
RE: To Be English - by ray - 07-30-2013, 08:35 PM
RE: To Be English - by cidermaid - 07-30-2013, 08:46 PM
RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 07-30-2013, 10:19 PM
RE: To Be English - by billy - 07-31-2013, 10:48 AM
RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 07-31-2013, 10:58 PM
RE: To Be English - by serge gurkski - 08-04-2013, 02:19 PM
RE: To Be English - by StevieFinn - 08-05-2013, 07:48 AM
RE: To Be English - by ray - 08-05-2013, 06:55 PM
RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-05-2013, 10:06 PM
RE: To Be English - by StevieFinn - 08-05-2013, 11:56 PM
RE: To Be English - by StevieFinn - 08-06-2013, 07:49 AM
RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-06-2013, 08:48 AM
RE: To Be English - by billy - 08-06-2013, 09:43 AM
RE: To Be English - by Wildcard - 08-06-2013, 12:49 PM
RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-06-2013, 01:00 PM
RE: To Be English - by serge gurkski - 08-06-2013, 03:02 PM
RE: To Be English - by tectak - 08-06-2013, 10:35 PM
RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-07-2013, 03:08 AM
RE: To Be English - by rayheinrich - 08-07-2013, 05:16 AM
RE: To Be English - by Green Ink - 08-07-2013, 08:25 AM
RE: To Be English - by tectak - 08-07-2013, 04:53 PM
RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-07-2013, 11:39 PM
RE: To Be English - by rayheinrich - 08-08-2013, 05:57 AM
RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-08-2013, 06:12 AM
RE: To Be English - by Achebe - 06-30-2016, 07:08 PM
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