Little Pink Lines

[TheWall0912]

And they continued
Laughing as they saw
My face dripping with their disgust I like this line a lot, dripping is very descriptive
My body laced with a drug
Capable of creating two
Little pink lines Just not sure what you're referring to, I think your message is a little unclear.
And a panic that would arise
Before the morning sun.

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Overall I'd say this is a good start. I would suggest trying to make your point more clear. You might also want to add some punctuation, it would make it easier to read. It isn't clear right now where certain thoughts end, a few commas or periods would do the trick.