07-31-2013, 05:30 AM
I think the punctuation needs work. The lack there of made it hard to read. The first stanza doesn't flow well into the second stanza. But the rest is nice. It has great imagery
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Through the field - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-27-2013, 04:18 PM
RE: twenty minutes to hang him dead - by PoetryAndPhysics - 07-27-2013, 11:42 PM
RE: twenty minutes to hang him dead - by Darkblue - 07-30-2013, 06:04 AM
RE: twenty minutes to hang him dead - by KSD - 07-30-2013, 10:31 AM
RE: twenty minutes to hang him dead - by milo - 07-30-2013, 10:51 AM
RE: twenty minutes to hang him dead - by GrhmJngL - 07-31-2013, 02:41 AM
RE: twenty minutes to hang him dead - by TheWall0912 - 07-31-2013, 03:04 AM
RE: twenty minutes to hang him dead - by jdguyb - 07-31-2013, 05:30 AM
RE: Through the field - by R.C. KITCHENS - 08-06-2013, 12:33 PM
RE: Through the field - by TheWall0912 - 08-07-2013, 08:57 PM
RE: Through the field - by Bunx - 08-10-2013, 03:44 AM
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