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Through the field
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07-30-2013, 10:31 AM
Not really experienced with commenting, but I really liked how descriptive it was and how it laid everything out for visualization. What I noticed though was that most of the details are very specific, however you use the word "about" twice when describing the wooden structure. Maybe just state the length/distance? My two cents but other then that I really enjoyed reading that.
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Through the field - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-27-2013, 04:18 PM
RE: twenty minutes to hang him dead - by PoetryAndPhysics - 07-27-2013, 11:42 PM
RE: twenty minutes to hang him dead - by Darkblue - 07-30-2013, 06:04 AM
RE: twenty minutes to hang him dead - by KSD - 07-30-2013, 10:31 AM
RE: twenty minutes to hang him dead - by milo - 07-30-2013, 10:51 AM
RE: twenty minutes to hang him dead - by GrhmJngL - 07-31-2013, 02:41 AM
RE: twenty minutes to hang him dead - by TheWall0912 - 07-31-2013, 03:04 AM
RE: twenty minutes to hang him dead - by jdguyb - 07-31-2013, 05:30 AM
RE: Through the field - by R.C. KITCHENS - 08-06-2013, 12:33 PM
RE: Through the field - by TheWall0912 - 08-07-2013, 08:57 PM
RE: Through the field - by Bunx - 08-10-2013, 03:44 AM
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