07-30-2013, 08:17 AM
Hi,
I love the humor in this poem, it made me chuckle, especially the last stanza. I read it a few times and I think you have a nice rhythm going throughout. Sorry I couldn't be of any help critique wise.
Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it.
LB
I love the humor in this poem, it made me chuckle, especially the last stanza. I read it a few times and I think you have a nice rhythm going throughout. Sorry I couldn't be of any help critique wise.
Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it.
LB