07-30-2013, 04:15 AM
Thanks, RCK. I've changed the title and some other things. Still a poor poem but a little better. Beginning and end need working on, I guess.
I remain bemused that lines 6-8 give difficulty, it's the one part I thought were straightforward.
I remain bemused that lines 6-8 give difficulty, it's the one part I thought were straightforward.
Before criticising a person try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise that person, you are a mile away.... and you have their shoes.