07-28-2013, 12:40 PM
Overall, really like this poem, especially how candid it is. I would agree that it needs punctuation and certain parts feel a bit awkward or forced to me (change a bit..have a fit).
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Our Love , Edit one!
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Our Love , Edit one! - by jdguyb - 07-28-2013, 04:12 AM
RE: Our Love - by Volaticus - 07-28-2013, 07:38 AM
RE: Our Love - by TLAM4060 - 07-28-2013, 12:40 PM
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