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Aish

Raven Queen

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07-28-2013, 10:19 AM

summer romance drips
the taste of moon in my mouth
under your sky-map

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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blush (senryu) - by Aish - 07-28-2013, 10:19 AM

RE: blush (senryu) - by billy - 07-28-2013, 10:23 AM

RE: blush (senryu) - by Aish - 07-28-2013, 10:33 AM

RE: blush (senryu) - by billy - 07-28-2013, 10:35 AM

RE: blush (senryu) - by Aish - 08-01-2013, 03:29 PM

RE: blush (senryu) - by billy - 08-05-2013, 08:06 AM

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